CANNOT-
STAND-
LONG-
AND-
TOO-
MUDDLED-
WORDS.
Yes. I like them, and I'm mostly used to them, but some of them don't make sense because the writer's just trying to make it sound pretty. I love writers who are straight to the point, and occasionally uses figurative language; but not too much that it sounds like rabble disguised as sweet words. That might be too trying with my patience.
Like this: "Lost in the crushing oblivion, without a piercing light to plunge me out of the shadows and into the judgemental light."
I love it, BUT if it's going to keep continuing ON and ON...I might go crazy. I DO like it, but I just wish people will slow down with their suffocating pretty words.



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So sick of trying, so sick of crying, yeah I'm smiling but inside I'm dieing.
I'm so-so.
You?
Do you have any poems you're working on?
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So sick of trying, so sick of crying, yeah I'm smiling but inside I'm dieing.
Yeah, I'm working on one but I'm procrastinating.
Good! I can't wait to see it. I've mostly been doing just photography.
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So sick of trying, so sick of crying, yeah I'm smiling but inside I'm dieing.
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